Another Poem

[Branflakes]

Redone. I think the final result is better.

Visiting Wants

A bright smile and wicked grin.
A surprise attack behind the timid.
A simple touch, your purpose revealed.
Passion realized and a welcome relief
That drowns my daily dreary and firm belief.
An expert anew, an expert refreshed.
A time enjoyed, back to life.


[This message has been edited by Branflakes (edited August 27, 2000).]

[Branflakes]

Another rough draft....

Love and Wait

Youthful intense attacks my thoughts
While my conscience remarks
About my tilt away from
This blessed moral drum
Of imposed love and wait.

Am I to follow passion's stare
And allow you to step into your own snare?
Or should I steer you away,
Ignoring your play,
And teach you the resolve
To hold onto your control
For your share of love and wait.

[Branflakes]

Mind of Heart

I cannot control my heart.
I?ll instruct it on what to say and do,
But it impedes itself to my social duels.
I stare and nod about friendships
While my heart screams about loves and bliss.
My mind debates that which makes sense
While my heart concatenates on what could?ve been.
Dreams rise in my heart, while reality minds my dark.
I know what I can have with you.
Just know sometimes what I want with you.


[This message has been edited by Branflakes (edited September 08, 2000).]

[LAMECH]

Though those were all good the last had to be my favorite. Write some more.

[Branflakes]

Thanks. I like the last one best, so far.

Here's another....

Darkness I Dream

It comes upon my eyes,
This sadness of your lies.
Yesterday we dreamed of future
Wheres and moving past
The times of hurt and mellow place.
Now you face me with your thoughts
Of leaving and ?needing space?.
I can only watch your retreat
And dream again in dark defeat.



[This message has been edited by Branflakes (edited September 08, 2000).]